For a first submission, this is very good. The file has a lot of potential, and a fair few of the quests (though I admit I am yet to play through the whole file) were creative in their own right. Good work, and I hope to see more from you. I will be sure to comment in greater detail when I have completed the scenario.
[Edited on 12/20/09 @ 06:39 PM]
Dtrungle Official Reviewer
Posted on 12/25/09 @ 04:00 PM
Splendid job for a first scenario.
The map design was adequate. It looked messy but somehow worked... strange.
Some areas were a bit tight to walk through and the useless wolf didn't help. The wolf rarely attacks anything because it's tasked to you and it can block your path.
Lots of quests, fresh quests. Good job.
For the future, when your hero dies, give a final speech as well as a timer before defeating the player. I prefer it this way because it gives me time to restart/load the game.
The game is on the easy side but it's not a real game is it? You go around doing quests, it needs more meat.
For the future, make the quests, dialogues transitions and gameplay flow smoother.