I *would* write a review but it isn't 'big' enough to do so.
You have some random buildings, a troop of soldiers scattered across the map all with +9999 or similar Attack bonus and the objective is for the hero (named after the author) to survive.
Dear Ron, please take a look at any file rated 4 or higher and compare it to yours. What you have now is triggers for naming, for defeat if the hero dies and for attack bonus. That just isn't enough for a enjoyable file, and a huge open field of grass 1 isn't either.
Like I said before, take a look at some of the better scenario's/campaigns and read some guides (in the University) and then try again.
Hope to see good work of you in a few days or weeks.
ron900123 File Author
Posted on 02/07/10 @ 04:55 PM
hey im new at this ok i need pointers you know advice
Posted on 02/07/10 @ 10:41 PM
The best way to improve is by reading. There are several excellent Scenario Design articles in the AoKH University.
AoKH has a Scenario Design Forum, start with the FAQ page here (and you can ask questions.)