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Lost in the Great Ocean

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supertails224
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Version: The Conquerors
Well this is my first SUBMITTED file. I hope it's ok! Please Play, Rate, and Comment!
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You must collect 5000 wood to build a fire big enough for a boat to see! Good luck.

P.S. this is a very easy game.
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Mashek
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Official Reviewer
Interesting concept, but why 5,000 wood? People will be there for a long time before they manage to meet the objective. You could perhaps shorten it by a bit but it's your choice.
supertails224
File Author
The original idea was to have them collect 1,000 wood... But I figured it would be too short. How about going to 2,500?




(Grammatical errors lol.)

[Edited on 02/01/10 @ 09:04 PM]

Mashek
Staff
Official Reviewer
1,000 wood would be better but as you said would make the file too short. How about some more story? There's plenty else that could happen after building a camp fire. There are more eyes surveying the ocean than simply innocent captains and crewmen going about their day. Pirates might be watching too...
supertails224
File Author
Ahhhh yes that is a great idea.. But that's why I'm a story writer and not a plot runner(that's not the word.. But oh well.)

Edit: Ok I have the game ready-ish I changed the 5000 wood to 2500. But I still need ideas about the boat......

[Note: Please use the edit button to avoid double posting ~ Blacksmith Staff]

[Edited on 02/05/10 @ 10:49 PM]

Jecon
Rating
2.8
Breakdown
Playability2.0
Balance4.0
Creativity3.0
Map Design3.0
Story/Instructions2.0
Playability: 2
This is not the most exciting scenario I've ever played, but it was still interesting, especially due to the author making others you can find with some interesting dialogue(although the author really needs to reduce the amount of wood you need to collect).

Balance: 4
Reaching the 5000 wood necessary is very possible, there's no lack of wood, although it takes quite a while.

Creativity: 3
The idea of having to collect wood to make a fire to signal a ship as a scenario idea is rather creative, though a little boring.

Map Design: 3
The author obviously put a little time into the map, although not much, a little terrain mixing would go far.

Story/Instructions: 2
Very basic story/instructions not really much there.

Additional Comments:
An interesting time waster in the afternoon, but to make it better maybe make a quest to go get some fire for the bonfire, or something more than just chopping wood. And you need to reduce the amount of wood to 1000~2000 wood to make it a little less tedious.

Good luck designing, Jecon.

[Edited on 03/07/10 @ 10:33 PM]


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Rating
2.8
Breakdown
Playability2.0
Balance4.0
Creativity3.0
Map Design3.0
Story/Instructions2.0
Statistics
Downloads:246
Favorites: [Who?]1
Size:5.87 KB
Added:01/31/10