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Unsuccessful Riot

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orinu
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Version: The Conquerors
This is my first scenario for aok and i am planning to do better things than this. I it somewhat presentaion of my skill, so you can see how well can i work with the editor. I am sorry for possible mystakes I am not english.
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Mashek
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I have moved this file from Cinematic Scenarios to Single Player Scenarios where it better serves.

An interesting concept, quite funny, but too little story. Who are these miners and why do they work in the mines? More importantly, why do they want to rebel? Simply feeling unmotivated isn't much of a reason to kill a guard... Also, the miners clearly lose in the end. Wouldn't "You Have Been Defeated" be more realistic? Anyway, keep it up, and I look forward to seeing more from you.

- Blacksmith Administrator

[Edited on 03/11/10 @ 07:34 AM]

Linkiejj
Rating
1.8
Breakdown
Playability2.0
Balance2.0
Creativity3.0
Map Design1.0
Story/Instructions1.0
Playability: 2
Killing the Man-at-arms was possible,but not the hussars. Its impossible to kill the Hussars but a sudden win isnt fun. I liked it a little bit.

Balance: 2
Plain,common,only kill a guard. sheeshh..Not Balanced enough.


Creativity: 3
Your First Scenario,I won't look to hard,but I think it lacks on Creativity. Give it a story.

Map Design: 1
A Hole in the ground,Stone mines,villagers,and a blank grass/dirt ground. Urgh...Give it more things,put a rock on some spots.

Story/Instructions: 1
Well,it has No story.
Its plain that its reasonless to kill a guard if you get enough of it. No Instructions.
its a 1,they only get enough of working as a slave,kills a guard,and then they are overwhelmed.

Additional Comments:

I didnt like it,maybe you should get a story around it.
Also,I'm maybe a little 'weird' Reviewing,thats,because its my first review.
Good luck on your next scenario/campaign.

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Rating
1.8
Breakdown
Playability2.0
Balance2.0
Creativity3.0
Map Design1.0
Story/Instructions1.0
Statistics
Downloads:208
Favorites: [Who?]0
Size:6.80 KB
Added:03/09/10