This is a story about a persian king named Khosro shah. He did great things for his empire such creating a stable government for persia. He brought economy and wealth. He is also a great fighter. He was a great threats to roman and a pray to greeks.He also had a son named prince Farshad.
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PLAYABILITY: It seems like you never played a good campaign from this site before, your campaign looks like a computer campaign; a random map game. But it was still quite funny to play, or at least, the first scenario. The second was bad let me explain it at the next point
BALANCE: The Second scenario was far too easy. You started with a whole heap of resources and enough villagers to boom immediately. But what was even worse; with the army you got at the start, you could 'rush' Alexander away! You didn't need to build up anything, just get your army and defeat Alexander.
CREATIVITY: A random map game, a random map, so a 1 actually, but I'll give you a 2 because of the story.
MAP DESIGN: A random map so a 1 IMO, but according to the campaign and scenario reviewing tutorial I'll have to give you a 3 for it.
STORY/INSTRUCTIONS: You had a nice story, but you didn't do much with it, because it was a random map game (hope you don't mind me complaining about that again). There weren't much instructions
OK, at first sorry for the mistakes in grammar but English isn't my first language.
To the designer: It may seems like a want to write you campaign down, but that's not true. See it as advice to make your camapigns better next time, don't be discouraged to make another campaign, but be more creative. Every 'newbie' if I may call you so needs advice to make his campaigns better. My own first campaign was not very good either, but I am currently working on one which will be great (I think) but the key to a good campaign is, besides the necessary know-how about triggers conditions and effects: Don't want to finish it as soon as possible, take your time to make it as you wanted it before you started. Details are very important.
I wish you much success with your next campaigns, and I hope I could help you a little with this very long review.