I made this map some time ago and i updated it 1-2 weeks ago... Thought you will like it! If you see any glitches tell me, and if you like it tell me! :D I want criticism and also if you guys want i can update the version... (Currently unreleased but updated versions : 0~2,0~3 and 0~4)
Sorry to give you this mark, but this RPG is hardly entertaining if even worth playing. The only path that actually lasts longer than 20 seconds before becoming repetitive is Mercenary, and even that soon gets boring after butchering non-respawning Militia for over a minute.
Also, a game where I have to restart if someone calls 'everyone attack now!' needs improvement.
If you want to get higher marks, you should consider making this whole game less repetitive, or concentrate on one choice and make it decent instead of making 4 poor, unplayable choices.
Far too easy, there is no way anything could go wrong. For an RPG this is seriously lacking in challenge. Also, the game has only 21 triggers. That is seriously disappointing.
While I must give you some credit for thinking of having multiple-choices for an RPG along with other things, this hardly has any creativity put into it. I went over the triggers and there was absolutely nothing that would have grabbed anyone's attention.
Map Design: 2
While I could notice some attempts at eye-candy in parts of the map, you did not use elevation and the land simply became flat grass after I left the main city as a mercenary.
Better than some I've seen with no instructions at all, but still lacking in detail. This is probably because you had nothing more to write about since the game becomes repetitive very fast, but you still could have explained things better. If I were someone who couldn't see the scenario map and simply read the instructions, I would have not a single idea what the heck was going on.
Please improve it with your next update and I might cover this review up with a better one.
[Edited on 01/22/11 @ 06:55 PM]
PhantomAw3 File Author
Posted on 01/27/11 @ 10:59 AM
Thank you very much for the review, i appriciate it and i will make some changes in the future, but i have a problem... I made Version 0~4 but it doesn't want to upload... I guess its too big :(
*EDIT* I just saw the 21 triggers... Yes that is true, pretty dissapointing to me. I have NO IDEEA why i uploaded version 0.1 when i had 0~2, 0~3 and 0~4 with loads of triggers :(
[Edited on 01/27/11 @ 11:01 AM]
Posted on 01/27/11 @ 07:44 PM
Really? Hmm... too big seems unlikely... Are you sure you're doing the updating correctly?
Ah, I see this is your first upload. Good job for a first try, of course. There was nothing wrong with it, it was just too short. Not enough of a good thing, if you know what I'm saying. Maybe put in some objectives?
Posted on 01/28/11 @ 12:29 AM
Make sure your file is a .zip
Use the update button to update this file instead of uploading a new one.