This is the 3rd scenario from my campaign Far From Beloved Land. John is sold as an slave in China. He will have to escape and find a way to begin returning home.
My idea since now is to submit all scenarios of my campaign here, receive comments, reported bugs, impressions... then fix everything and finally update the whole campaign.
This scenario does not offer difficulty levels because it's absolutely lineal.
I imagine it some parts would be difficult to understand, so I've added a Game Guide (into Hints). If something is not clear enough tell me anyway.
There's a lot of work here. I hope you to like it.
You have immense potential. I played through it and can tell that with more effort and more thorough designing, you can make an epic campaign. You have some very neat and unique ideas.
What requires a lot of work though is your instructions, I had to check the Hints and wing through it as I had no clue what to do.
Also, it's clear that English isn't your first language so communication can be difficult. Though, it's not too bad.
Lord Sole File Author
Posted on 02/21/11 @ 11:23 AM
Thank you for trying the scenario and comment about it, Dtrungle!
About the instructions, I understand that if you get lost or stucked and have to look the Game Guide everytime, it can be boring. On the other hand, I don't want to say what you've to do at every moment, because then the scenario would not have any interest than just follow instructions. I'll think about a middle point, anyway, and I'll add some clearer clues.
And about the language, I'll carry on checking the dictionary! (if anyone sees a clamorous mistake or a sentence with no sense, please tell me)
And I wish I could make a good campaign: I'll try to do my best.