Just a suggestion, but a description of what you're offering downloaders goes a long way. Describe to us what the scenario is about without giving anything away. A little description will suffice.
As for the cinematic, it was interesting and I quite liked it, but there are a few issues; the solving of which will go a long way to creating a more favourable impression. Set a hold-off unit for player 1 off to the corner of the map where it cannot be seen (I usually use a hunting wolf or horse for this, but it doesn't really matter) and block it off with forest.
Next go to options and select the 'set view' option to the centre of the map. This will ensure the player begins the cinematic looking at the black fog rather than at your hold-off unit. Secondly, search around the AI category and look for a good AI that will ensure your units don't move. It looks odd having every unit half way in its movement phase like that.
A good AI is the ADVANCED Immobile AI by Zanthar Lothard. You may download it here: