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JS-Deception-a love story(Trailer)

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(Updated on 06/30/11)
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sathcooperation
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Deception


-A 17th century love story

This is the trailer of the upcoming cinematic map, 'Deception'. This map will be divided into 2 parts, with a introduction.

First release will have a Introduction and first half.

Second release will have second half and the Ending.

This is map is based on the story on-project by BF_Juilingstar. The whole story will be given in ending, and posted in alpha writings blog.

Juilingstar Productions and Alpha
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dragonslayermcmx
Official Reviewer
Sounds Nice. Im gonna download it (as first one) and then perhaps review it.
sathcooperation
File Author
Thank you for comment.
Please not'e not to judge a cinematic scenario by poster :O
dragonslayermcmx
Official Reviewer
Sorry, but i didn´t like this. The Triggers are very poor, and it looks like this hasnt even been playtested.

Sorry, but i don´t recommend to download this.

Also, there should be music in there, but i think you forgot to put that into the zip file.

I give you a small tipp, download some scenarios with a high rating of 4 or 5. That might help you a bit. Good luck with the campaign.
dragonslayermcmx
Official Reviewer
Rating
1.4
Breakdown
Playability2.0
Pacing1.0
Creativity1.0
Map Design2.0
Story/Instructions1.0
JS Deception is a short cutscene trailer for a lovestory campaign, wich i think needed 10 minutes to be created.

Playability: I enjoyed nearly nothing here. It was boring, and nearly nothing was happening. The music balanced it a bit. 2

Balance: Very Bad. Some Words, and the Cutscene is over. The music make it look a bit brighter, but for a big part nothing is happening. I really recommend you to just take some more time, if you would have spend at least 2 hours this could have scored a 3 or 4. but now - sadly - it scores a 1


Creativity: Very little triggerwork. About 15 Triggers, some small sentences and then there is a 121 timer only for the music. After the timer is over, you see the title of the story and after that there is even no trigger to let you win and to end the cutscene. 1


Map Design: A part of the map is well created, only to be a waste of time for you just see a really small part of this map. On Marco Polo or in the editor it looks a bit good. 2

Story/Instructions: You see nothing about the story, the chats which are beeing sent during the cutscene are very few and very boring. 1

To the Author: Please don´t take this review as an offence, its there for you to see your mistakes in it and learn to make better, cutscenes, scenarios, etc.

In Closing: A very boring and cutscene if you download it you waste your time.

Good luck with the campaign!


Dragonslayermcmx

[Edited on 07/02/11 @ 08:19 AM]

sathcooperation
File Author
I have corrected the music. I respect your dislike, but this map looks naked without music. Please try seeing it with music again.
dragonslayermcmx
Official Reviewer
Hehe, and why is it a RAR file? And where do i have to place it? If i rename it with mp3 then i cannot play it.

I have Posted a review too, it´ll show up soon, but when you told me what to do with the music, then i might edit it.
sathcooperation
File Author
I am too clumsy.
Re-updated the file, with music straight.
dragonslayermcmx
Official Reviewer
As soon as the review shows up i will edit it a bit, it looks better with the music. Its really good so i will put it on my I Pod :) Whats the real name of it?
sathcooperation
File Author
Well that's a music from Heros of Might and Magic 6 Trailer. I am excluding this stuff. I am deep flowed in triggers. This Trailer is just a bit of joke now. Never mind, I will upload the 'good' part 1 in half a month or so..l.
alekshs What's the main idea of this trailer,sathcooperation?

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Rating
1.4
Breakdown
Playability2.0
Pacing1.0
Creativity1.0
Map Design2.0
Story/Instructions1.0
Statistics
Downloads:320
Favorites: [Who?]0
Size:1.47 MB
Added:06/29/11
Updated:06/30/11