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JS-Deception-a love story(Trailer)

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(Updated on 06/30/11)
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Version: The Conquerors

Deception


-A 17th century love story

This is the trailer of the upcoming cinematic map, 'Deception'. This map will be divided into 2 parts, with a introduction.

First release will have a Introduction and first half.

Second release will have second half and the Ending.

This is map is based on the story on-project by BF_Juilingstar. The whole story will be given in ending, and posted in alpha writings blog.

Juilingstar Productions and Alpha
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dragonslayermcmx
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Rating
1.4
Breakdown
Playability2.0
Pacing1.0
Creativity1.0
Map Design2.0
Story/Instructions1.0
JS Deception is a short cutscene trailer for a lovestory campaign, wich i think needed 10 minutes to be created.

Playability: I enjoyed nearly nothing here. It was boring, and nearly nothing was happening. The music balanced it a bit. 2

Balance: Very Bad. Some Words, and the Cutscene is over. The music make it look a bit brighter, but for a big part nothing is happening. I really recommend you to just take some more time, if you would have spend at least 2 hours this could have scored a 3 or 4. but now - sadly - it scores a 1


Creativity: Very little triggerwork. About 15 Triggers, some small sentences and then there is a 121 timer only for the music. After the timer is over, you see the title of the story and after that there is even no trigger to let you win and to end the cutscene. 1


Map Design: A part of the map is well created, only to be a waste of time for you just see a really small part of this map. On Marco Polo or in the editor it looks a bit good. 2

Story/Instructions: You see nothing about the story, the chats which are beeing sent during the cutscene are very few and very boring. 1

To the Author: Please don´t take this review as an offence, its there for you to see your mistakes in it and learn to make better, cutscenes, scenarios, etc.

In Closing: A very boring and cutscene if you download it you waste your time.

Good luck with the campaign!


Dragonslayermcmx

[Edited on 07/02/11 @ 08:19 AM]


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Rating
1.4
Breakdown
Playability2.0
Pacing1.0
Creativity1.0
Map Design2.0
Story/Instructions1.0
Statistics
Downloads:321
Favorites: [Who?]0
Size:1.47 MB
Added:06/29/11
Updated:06/30/11