The specially located holy temple been protected by walls and "fortresses" is a nice motive to keep an eye on.As the map becomes revealed from time to time,you notice at what point does the challenge increases.The drawback to all this it that,at the end,you realize the game was more or less a simple "random map game",demanding just more time to win.
The map does not obtain a clear view of balance,as it can be either easy for you to win(if you know the locations of each enemy) or
very difficult(due to initial enemy military and the advantage of been 4 against 1).Maybe adding some military or more military buildings to human player would balance the game a bit.
The idea is nice-protecting your home is serious business to take care of.But,in spite of this,the game lacks innovation and some basic knowledge about the nature of the situation:For instance...why should the Town Center and all the villagers be off any protection?Having a watch tower near them or adding some natural stuff-let's say,some forest-would give more breath to continue.In addition...although the Red and Orange did owed strong bases and had vast amount of resources,something is missing:Shouldn't there be AT LEAST 2 villagers,so that there's some meaning to their conquest?
Map Design: 3
You managed to get nice grade at the aspect of design.Your fortress was beautifully designed,while the Yellow and Green had interesting surroundings of mountains,snowy
slopes and pine trees.The Red and Orange showed much ferocity,but they lacked motives(just army to create,what's the point?)
Ships could attack 1 or two times.
You explain what the players have to expect from the map.This is not enough,though-some may just download it and play it instantly(they'll have no instructions or scouting to guide them).Now even a single hint for the very beginners.You must include something,if you want to maintain some interest for your map.
Additional Comments:This map is a "cute" start to creating scenarios,but needs much improvement.
Before uploading some work,watch yourself if the final result is worth to do so.If you're lucking experience,see the works of others(especially the high-marked ones) and try for the best.