In fact, I'm not discouraged. I'm just surprised. Your review helped me A LOT, and i know now where i need to get better (especially in balance, where did you gived me a 1)
Where Can I read more articles about scenario designing?
Ah, and..
"For instance, I don't understand the scene before Joan's execution... was that an escape attempt? It was cut short and left hanging."
Yes, it was an escape attempt.
To the Others: Remember what I said. It's my very first campaign.
[Edited on 01/29/12 @ 04:42 PM]
panel Official Reviewer
Posted on 01/29/12 @ 07:29 PM
I'm glad my review was helpful. That's why I'm here.
To get more info about scenario design, please come to the scenario design and modding forums. You will find it here:
One of the threads that are stickied to the upper part of the page is called "Scenario design FAQ". YOu will find a lot of very interesting things there, and it answers almost all of the questions that a beginner might have. If you need other questions answered or just help, you can always ask the forummers there.