your file shows some promise. you seem like you enjoy setting up triggers, which is pretty rare for newbies these days. I will give you a few pointers for now:
- I think the file can do a lot better in terms of story. You could find a better name for the protagonist than "The hero". Also, there is definitely a need for a backstory. Who is he and where is he? And who is Anya anyway?
- The map design is interesting, I like the maze idea, but it could be made to look a lot better.
- Try to rename all of your triggers. It will help you a lot in keeping things under control.
- In the future don't submit the same file twice to the blacksmith. Wait until it gets approved, and then it will be available. You will also have the option to update it then.
MegaNguyenduyhun File Author
Posted on 06/03/12 @ 12:10 AM
Thanks for your comment ! I'll trying to wait the file and make some better scenario instead ! This is my first scenario so i have a lots of chance .
I difentely forgot to do the scenario "Siege on Harrogath " . I'll do it right now . sorry about that.
[Edited on 06/03/12 @ 01:01 AM]
Posted on 07/19/12 @ 04:00 PM
The trigger that fires when the hero exits the caves and enters the burning town causes the game to crash for me.