Off the Track is Exilee's entry to the 2015 Pretty Town Contest.
Authenticity: The concept of being lost in a forest and happening upon some settlements is by no means new, but was nevertheless an interesting idea. I feel, however, that more could have been done to establish better context, and this is perhaps due to some faulty triggering. The atmosphere could have been better executed but was not bad for a first entry.
Creativity: I was impressed by some relatively creative tricks involved in the map design, and the author clearly had a lot of interesting ideas. The implementation just needed a little improvement here.
Layout: The map design was not great, but not bad for a newbie either. There were certainly some good-looking spots, but I feel that the author could improve a lot by playing higher-rated content and participating in the forum discussion.
Technical skill: It seemed that faulty triggering and design that could have been implemented better hurt the score here. Nevertheless I feel that there is a lot of potential here and that the author should take heart in what was a rather decent first effort.