Playability - This scenario shows very little Playability as you are just told to "Protect you trade routes" and "Protect your relics". And I did just that. To cut a long story short, this scenario ended like a random map game, the enemy has all the standard random map units and You have several places surrounded by walls and a few Axemen. I would much prefere playing a random map game, as the map is much better than this. Also the 5 triggers were of no use as they only effect saying "Activate trigger=Itself! From this I suggest this is done by a someone unfamialer with the Scenario editor.
Balance - This had the balance of a random map and you could say it was slightly balanceed toward the player. Enough said.
Creativity - NO creativity at all. I suppose for a rookie it is not too bad so I won't got to harsh here :).
Map design: Surely more effort could be put in to this, cm'on man, 90% of the map was just plain grass and then a few rivers (4 to be precise). It did not even desereve a 2.
Story Instructions: At least there were some story and instructions at the begining of the scenario, but even those were full of grammer errors and spelling mistakes.
Similer to random map game
Very uncreative in all areas
NO EFFORT at all
Ok for a beginner
Triggers that work
Better-less bland map
More and improved Instructions/story
This map should not be downloaded as you will get nothing out of it all. Bland map, poor instructions and no triggers mean this should be avoided.