Age of Kings Heaven 139
Welcome
Downloads Home
Best Files
Review Guidelines
Main site
Forums
Code of Conduct
Search

Advanced Search
Single Player Scenarios
Home
New Releases
New Reviews
New Comments
Top-Rated

Submit File
Browse Categories
New Files
Recent Updates


Demon Within

Download File Post Review Post Comment
Author File Description
Arto
File Details
Version: Age of Kings
Style: Role Playing Strategy
Story:
------------------------------------------------------------ This is a tale of a man by the name of William Wallace. A simple man who lives in a small quiet village. He hopes to life and die a peaceful, pure life in his hometown of Karsh.
However, five years ago that dream was interfered with by an offer to help defend the city of Alexandria. The day he decided to accept that offer was the day his life would change forever. Whether it would be for the better or for the worse is yet to be determined?
Since then he has been going to his best friend Dane's hut to train and become useful in battle. In the meantime, he is protecting his own town from merciless thieves who preyed on the people of Karsh.
Finally, the day had come to see whether he would get accepted to Alexandria or not. And this is where you come in...

Features:
------------------------------------------------------------
- Deep story
- Plot twists
- No grammatical errors (I hope)
- 240 triggers
- "Click Talk" feature
AuthorComments & Reviews   ( All | Comments Only | Reviews Only )
Arto
File Author
BTW - This is my first scenario so if you have any suggestions on how I could improve my scenario then please post them. Also, if you enjoyed my scenario, please post your comments so I know if you want me to make more scenarios. Thanks!
Artofblack Hei Artsi... Mitä kaima. Kiva nähdä suomalaisiakin välillä(?) Juu... Mä lataan sen sun kenttäs ja laitan uuden kommentin sitten.
Arto
File Author
uhh... I dont speak Swedish (I think that is Swedish) but I would appreciate it if you could write whatever you said in English. I know the name Arto is Swedish but its not my name, it is my favorite skateboarder Arto Saari.
Arto
File Author
Whoops! I mean Finnish. hehe.
Artofblack HI! Sorry, I thought you were finnish. My name is Arto too. So I downloaded your scenario and it was good. I have samekind of project under work now (about demons and hell...) Yep. Keep up your good work. See ya...
Evil ElectraKnight That was finnish. This is swedish, din fula fjant.
Evil ElectraKnight and also, don't mix them up!!
ThePhoenix "Demon Within" REVIEWED
ThePhoenix
Rating
2.0
Breakdown
Playability3.0
Balance2.0
Creativity1.0
Map Design1.0
Story/Instructions3.0
"Demon Within" is a story about the battle between good and evil that rages inside every man....or at least, it's supposed to be. But lack of clarity and poor Map Design ruin what would have otherwise been a good scenario.

Playability:
This scenario is fun to play. However, in several places, you have to just walk from one place to another- the easiest way to bore a player/reviewer. Also, very few trigger tricks.

Balance:
Not very well balanced.......one thing I noticed is that the designer hasn't really put much thought into how many troops to give you (or the enemy) or what kind of troops.

Creativity:
Apart from the storyline, this scenario is completely devoid of any originality or creativity.

Map Design:
Poor. Not much effort put into it. The main area where he needs improvement.

Story/Instructions:
The story was, in my opinion, very good. I wanted to give it a 4.
However, it is definitely lacking in clarity, and more importantly, it's full of SPELLING MISTAKES!

On the whole, this is a not a bad scenario, in spite of the low rating I gave it. The designer definitely shows potential (Don't you hate that word?). The three areas where he needs HUGE improvement are:
1)Map Design
2)Checking his spelling and grammar. (First impression.....)
3)Using more (trigger) tricks

I wouldn't really recommend this scenario, but keep an eye out for the designer.

Post Review Post Comment

HGDL v0.7.1

Login
Forum Username:


Password:




Create a new account
Forgot password?
Rating
2.0
Breakdown
Playability3.0
Balance2.0
Creativity1.0
Map Design1.0
Story/Instructions3.0
Statistics
Downloads:965
Favorites: [Who?]0
Size:62.98 KB
Added:01/21/01