Saracens are attacking our homeland!
You need to stop them by destroying their castle within ten minutes. We only got one stronghold left and our units are tired and they want to go home.
Streams of units, heros, Bloody battles...
That's what you may expect.
Nice scenario! Its fun to play, even if you get tired of it the 3rd time or so ( Its max 10 minutes long ). Its no best of Aok, but a good download of you feel that you have nothing to do... A small review:
Playbility:(3) The part where the scenario is good. The point whit this is to have fun, no more no less. Even if its nothing special, its still pretty fun to play it. I didnt find any trigger errors, but you could have included some more instructions and some dialoges. There could also have been other enemy units than only camels and some heroes. A strange Berserk walked around but he never attacked me... Is that a trigger error? Anyway, good job!
Balance:(2) Not very hard, just put some pikes in a ram and send it to the castle. The camels will leave the ram alone for a couple of secounds so you can hurt the castle, and then attack it. This scenario should not be any problem to win for anyone( If you understand how to play)
Creativity:(2) The scenario lacked creativity because its almost like a normal multiplayed blood but worse (1 enemy unit) I didnt fine it any creative, but ill give it a "2" because its pretty cool that the enemy have already taken your camp, and that new to me.
Map Design:(2) Avange Map Design, some flowers and a mountain, but that looks pretty strange in the desert. Your camp is surrounded by Walls and Trees ( Oak Trees in masses ) and in a corner "His Coolness" stands whit bamboo trees. Nothing special.
Story/Instructions:(1) The worst lack. There are pretty useless instructions ( 3 sentences of text ) and the same amount of Hints. No real story exept "The saracens are invading your homeland"
Total score: 2.2
Final Word: Good scenario to play the first time, but you will get tired very quickley... Good job anyway.
If you want i can post this as a review.