PLAYABILITY: This was'nt fun, like I just mentioned. All you do is kill a bunch of champions and 3 bombard towers with 2 cavalry archers with over 100 attack.
BALANCE: This was the only area you actually got a point on. This was VERY EASY in the beggining. 2 people with over 100 attack killing a bunch of champions. But when you get to the bombard towers, you're gonna have to move around a bit. It is SUPER-EASY, then somewhat hard, then SUPER-EASY, then its not that hard at all.
CREATIVITY: The other areas basically explain this area. There is no sign of creativity.
MAP DESIGN: There is NO sign of good eye-candy or anything. Its just a path of snow with snow tree's. That is all. Not much to say.
STORY/INSTRUCTIONS: There is'nt even an objective. There really is'nt a story. Not much to say here either.
OVERALL: It's obvious that this was done in about 10 minutes.It's not fun walking in a snow path surrounded by snow tree's killing people 50 million times weaker than you.
You need to improve on your map design ALOT. Creativity should be improved greatly: Try to think of a something unique.Balance needs to be improved quite a bit, but not as much as the others. You need ALOT better stories, and have an objective. And finally, try to make the playability be better. For example, have it where you run into someone and engage in conversation to get the rating up just a little.