this scn is very lame and all the jokes arent even funny but hey your new so i give u credit. just try to design better next time.
Mark of God
Posted on 08/18/03 @ 12:00 AM
Erm..... A failed attempt at a comedy scenario. The jokes just want to make one weep, but hey, musiclover's a beginner, not bad for a beginner.....kinda...... ;)
This scenario is not really fun, it's....short, and...pointless. I'm sorry, musiclover, but I didnt like it too much. Maybe next time you can think of what YOU think is fun, then make. Huh musiclover?
I cant really make a statement on this. But this scenario is one word: easy. And thats coming from someone who has a zone rating of 1472 ;)
You have to say, as corny as the story is, it does make an intrestong attempt....kinda......
This needs work. Not shabby for a beginner but ugh.
As intrsting as the story is, soory. It is bad. I want to pull my hair out at this storyline. yuck.
So, musi, if you want to design better, have more creativity, and map design ides and patience. And plus, more triggers. :)
Posted on 11/09/03 @ 12:00 AM
Musiclover, the map was dull, the dialogue was poor, and the plot was unsupported and paper-thin. I know you can do better. Maybe your next work will be a 5.0! Who knows...