I couldn't believe the author could get to here, but he did. The only bad thing I noticed was that when Raconity changes diplomacy with you, you have to change it manually. Beter fix that.
I can't believe I'm giving him this! But balance was perfect! There are so many ways to die and it's just as easy to win!
The author threw in a lot of tricks. Unfortunately, most of them were already used. However, the author did have a few tricks which I've never seen before.
Looks like a combination of Yucatan and Highlands with less mountains. Only thing missing is less water. But it doesn't really count.
There were very little instructions in the beginning and no story originally either but hey, it's a demo. You don't know what happens in the full version. There was little or no capitalisation and grammar was slightly bad, but there was nothing else worth mentioning. Spelling is far better than the author's first works so I suppose the author did improve. My suggestions: Fix up all grammar and spelling mistakes.
More story and instructions.
There's a lot to do with the history section. Use it.
If you don't care about a scenario that has bad spelling and grammar and a scenario that's short enough if you know what you're doing, you must download this now!