This is the demo of my first campaign for use on the web.This campaign contains the first mission from the campaign I am working on.
Almost everyone has died and you have to lead a group of people to a cahtedrial to burry the dead king. It's a very easy and simple scn. but all the triggers work and the rest of the campaign will be better. Post a comment if anything is wrong so I can fix it.If you hate the scn, tell me what I can do to fix it. The next one which i am currently working on will allow you to hire mercenaries, hire boats for transport, and your people will have to eat.
Perhaps I just lucked onto the right route, but I found that I had no challenges or difficulties -- walk this way, you're done. So it was a bit on the trivial side. I like the story idea though, so I'd encourage you to keep trying.
I did notice some action when I was half way to the goal, but it was in the city far behind and no threat. I suppose it was meant to be a bit of an encouragement to get one's rear in gear and, in that sense, it worked!
I would recommend you get a good dictionary and look up the words you are using. Yes, we all make mistakes, and that's completely understandable, but frequent misspellings are always a distraction, at least to people who read well. The few I saw were at least two different misspellings of Cathedral, and bury.
Posted on 03/12/07 @ 09:32 AM
Be more specific where you want things to go to win.