This is an awsome scenario (I think). It is you and Red vs Green and Yellow. You have a nice large town pre-made for you. Over 15 triggers with 39 effects. The scenery is also pretty to look at, as well. E-mail me at MrB398@aol.com for questions or comments. Good luck!
There is a river that seperates your land from the enemy's land. You cannot build a dock on the type of water he selected for his river. Thus making it impossible for anyone cross the river and fullfill the objective.
The map showed a lack of effort except for the land inside your town.
Otherwise, triggers were put to good use (the villagers started to work as soon as the scenario started).
To improve, you should always play test your own scenario before you submit it. It should be free of bugs.