For me this demo was quite fun, it did amuse me, because you are a turkey.
Although what I felt on top of this you couldn't really work out how to get through the nightmare it was trial and error mostly. Though the last bit is quite good at how you can kill a turkey.
How many people have a game when you have a nightmare about beinging a turkey?
Map Design: 4
The map was very nice and I took the liberty to look at the whole map though the demo map is V.good. Though a 5 would of been awarded for the whole map the demo part isn't quite as good.
I know that English is not your first language and it does show. Though there are some bits which aren't translated such as the part when you get to the middle to select the lady turkey or around that time it was in spanish. Apart from that there were some gramatical errors it sounded like that you translateded it direct from a dictonary. So I took that into account and gave 4.
Good beggining for a scenario, also there is a small section of Ice which doesn't freeze you which is on the right after you leave the starting place for the turkey.