A Battle For Peace (teaser)
You are Johannes Dagen, one of four Generals who command the Ackolian armies. You answer to King Darill, the ruler of the Ackolian Empire.
||The Conquerors 1.0c
There has been peace in the land of Ackolia for many years, but the empire has kept a force of men in case a war should ever arise. It had been hoped that this would never happen, because Ackolia is the only empire in the known world. But, when one of your fellow Generals tries to cause the people of Ackolia to rebel against the rule of King Darill, war breaks out.
If the defected general, a man by the name of Amoras Krystoff, had stayed in the mapped regions of the world, capturing him would be easy, and quelling the rebellions, still easier. But, as luck would have it, Krystoff has managed to find a new continent, just outside of the known ocean waters.
With the protection of the oceans expance, Krystoff's men have been turning more and more people against the empire, and has even begun to send troops to fight the armies of Ackolia.
In such dark times, you are the only hope of the empire, and of King Darill. Your mission: Go to this new continent, find, and capture Amoras Krystoff. It will be a difficult task, and you may loose many men, but you must capture him. Without Krystoff's leadership, it is hope that the rebellions will fall apart. God go with you!
This is a teaser for my new campaign. If you could post a comment and tell me how you liked it, I will take all opinions into count when making the rest of the scenario. Thanks
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Since this is a cinematic I will rate based on cinematic review guidelines(which apparently doesn't exist for Aok but does exist for EE)
Ok the triggers were perfect and there was no lag-so I guess you can get a good score here
This however cannot be rated since it was a cutscene.However it seemed that the author achieved what he wanted through the cutscene you know like which units should die or live..stuff like that
The story telling was impressive and the cutscene in general impressive.I do have one question how do you start a game with no player one units and also the creation and removal of map revealer.
Map Design: 3
Was average, nothing that great.Decent terrain mixing and city design
This was definitely the best part -you know the overall story and journal part were well written
Overall 4.6.Good job.Rarely does new scenario designers create exceptional scenarios.Well I hope you are happy with the review I made on your campaign.Believe me it rocks!