I think you need to be a little more creative with your map designing. The storyline was ok, but it had no objectives, which pretty much leaves the player on his own. It also didn't have any triggers. I am new to scenario designing, but I suggest you put a little more effort into designing if you want to make a better campaign. But good job anyway and keep on designing...
Haru File Author
Posted on 01/10/06 @ 06:54 AM
thanks for your comments Super_Cell_51 as I am also new at making maps I will start to add the the things you told me about right away