Hello there, well its been long since ive last posted a scenerio but it had a lot of bugs and was not liked by most and I hope this scenerio will be somewhat better than my last one i.e. 'From Slave to King', please comment on it and report upon any bugs you happen to find out and tips to how this can be improved.... Thank you..
I found this scenario quite fun to play, but because of several trigger bugs (for example triggers that didn't fire when they were supposed to or triggers firing to early)I found in the scenario I lowered the score. Later on in the scenario it also lags, which is frustrating because you're fighting a battle at that moment.
I played the scenario first on moderate and again on hard. Both times I played I had to reload a couple of times. Some battles I could only win by hit&run tactics. As I said under "playability" the bugs in this scenario hurt balance some times. For example, you had to destroy a camp while the soldiers guarding it just walked away so it was way to easy. This also made the scenario easier further on, because you had more soldiers.
It was a good point that your group of knights was varied. Not just knights, but also Cavalry Archers.
In this scenario, no tricks are used.
The names used in this scerio were original, altough they didn't seem French to me.
Map Design: 4
The map for this scenario was quite good. It wsa custom made, but the terrain could have been blenden more. Now there was very little variation in it. The map was also designed for the scenario to much.
Something that was a bit weird, was that villages had many military buildings.
What really is a bad thing in this scenario, is that new objectives don't appear n the objectives screen.
In the dialogues there are grammar and spelling errors. For example most sentences didn't have any comma's when there should have been comma's. The dialogues also appeared with nine lines at a time, which looks a bit silly to me.
The story of this scenario is good; you take command of a group of French knights that is going to inspect the province and help the people there if needed.
Additional Comments: For a second scenario, this is good. Keep practicing with the triggers and mix up the terrain more.
NOTE: I'm from the Netherlands, so my English isn't very good I think. I'm sorry about any grammar and/or spelling errors.