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Jillu The Warrior

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Finan
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Version: The Conquerors 1.0c
Style: Mix
Number of scenarios: 8
This is my first campaign.It is nice.You will really enjoy it.There are 8 scenarios in this campaign.All the scenario is created by me alone.

This is about a king called Jillu and his friend a british king called Johnson.
Jillu wanted to make his kingdom big so he started conquering lands.
While his friend get into many troubles.So he is helping him.
This campaign too have how he is making his kingdom bigger and stronger.
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Guthan Look better for your triggers, some of them you just can't follow, make sure the words stays long enough to read them. Good luck with other Scenario's!

Greetings
Guthan

[Edited on 01/15/08 @ 06:32 PM]

Green_Turtle Your readme file was the same as your post. Simply saying "You will like it" is not going to get many downloads. And how are we suppost to know anything about how to install the campaign, or what it is like if your readme is pointless? You might as well just not include a readme at all. You need to seriosly improove. I do not mean to hurt your feelings, only to tell you what you did wrong. Please practice by playtesting, having friends playtest, and most of all, BE CREATIVE. Do not submit somthing if it is not creative. These things take time, and if you do not have enough time, then don't do it untill you do.

Hope you improve, Green_Turtle. :|

[Edited on 01/15/08 @ 06:42 PM]

Vizorslash What's it about? Put something in the description
jazmanX1 post a description because i wont download this otherwise.
Finan
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It is a nice campiagn i think.Please rate it

[Edited on 01/11/08 @ 11:59 AM]

Sword_of_STORM
Official Reviewer
uh, did you just 'talk' to yourself.

Also, that's not a description.
Guthan Yea lol, kinda weird.
I downloaded it and played it, but didn't really liked it... I posted a review, like the same day that it appears here, but it hasn't appeared here yet lol
Greetings,
Guthan
Hambone2010 WOW that was weird
Godentine You complimenting your own work does not impress me.
Lightningz First of all, if you want to write an informative description you need to spell correctly. So please get a dictionary or something. Second of all, I want to state that I fully agree with Godentine. You complimenting your own work does not impress us. Third of all, when some people who apparently are experienced AoK designers give you constructive advice, you simply blow them off by replying, "It is a nice campaign I think. Please rate it". Frankly, I find that disrespectful over the other players who were trying to help you. It's quite arrogant to continue saying "It's a nice campaign" when five others kindly told you it wasn't, and gave you some hints on how to improve.

A big part of designing is learning how to get better. You can never stop increasing your skills. But the only way to increase them is by accepting criticism from the people who have come further then you. If you can't accept criticism as a designer, then you just simply can't design.
Good luck in the future.

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Downloads:931
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Size:537.52 KB
Added:12/27/07
Updated:01/02/08