This is my first scenario on the Heaven website. So please rate and tell me how I did.
This is basicaly following a path to a town (along the way killing enemys) where from there you will build up a bigger army to kill of the invaders' millitary base. Instructions for installation enclosed.
This was a fun game, there are many areas to improve on, but it is alot better than I thought it would be when I downloaded it. Good game.
The reason I give it a 2 is because there were very few enemies. He tells us to prepare defenses and attack the enemies ahead, but all the enemies were 10 or 15 man-at-arms, 2 barracks, and 2 archery ranges. They had no economy at all so they could only create a limited number of soldiers depending on how many resources they were given to begin with.
He said this is his first submission, but still, I could tell he used some triggers, and I know the number of triggers doesnt matter, but he even told us that he hadnt figured out how to make us lose if Robin or Tuck died.
Map Design: 3
It is mainly bamboo and leaves. Nice combination, but there should have been some more terrain mixing. But the town looked nice!
Not much, just the basics. He told us how to win, gave an attempt of a short story, which was rather the objective but also told us we should already know the story, which says that he is lazy and doesnt want to write it out. Sorry, but 3.
Reccomended Download: ?
(Depends on who you are and what you like. If you are used to PbP and Chrombrosia scenarios, no way. If you are like me, and want something to do, then yes. :) Only download if you are out of games to play.)
This is surprisingly good for a first submission. Keep up the work and you'll get better. Maybe read up on some SD courses on the forums or something to improve your skills. :) Keep it up! :D
[Edited on 08/13/08 @ 03:35 PM]
Posted on 09/15/08 @ 02:38 AM
Therefore this is your first sumbition. This game is very fun, Robin Hood and his army!! Keep it work, try your best!!
The Enemy is weak and unchallenge than Robin Hood Army. Dont Worry, try to updated then again.
Triggers is might be improtant. But is fine, i love it!
Map Design: 4
Amazing! You using leaves and forest terrain. But how you make all leaves terrain as blank area. Goob Job!
The stroy is about Robin Hood, good!
You still need know about Triggers, but thats ok!! Make new objects and cool GAIA unit. Keep Making!! Gerat Work!!