I played your Campaign and thought that you have got the right idea and plenty of potential. However, (there's always a however) you need to watch out when writing texts. Make sure you remember capital letters etc. I didn't quite understand the ending message, when you said "Alas! It was a victory ...etc" Just to let you know that "Alas" signifies that something is wrong, and you are despairing for some reason.
One final piece of feedback is that you need to concentrate on Map Design. I always stick to the rule that, "If you can see a blank screen full of just grass, the map design is not finished. Just try adding in little clumps of trees on hills around the place, and maybe put some flowers underneath the trees, and some rocks about the place.
But you really have the right idea, so well done as it's your second game.