I understand that it is your first submission but you should put more effort into your work. Good things first, you write text and connect the scenarios with a story. However, it is no fun to kill inferior enemies enclosed by square walls, there is no challenge, map design none existent, and not creative at all. Play some scenarios/campaigns from this site with a rating in the average, 3.0, range to improve your design skills.
Posted on 07/11/09 @ 06:05 PM
This need more work (A lot of work) :(
you should see ''Desing article''(in the homepage of this site) :D