This is the first episode of my saga called Lord of Time. Don't worry its nothing like any Lords of the Rings or something. The main idea is based on Prince of Persia though the story is widely different. This is v1 of the scenario. A new v2 will also be released which feature some new inprovements and some possible bugs fixed.
Download a high-rated scenario and check it out. You should be able to discover some improvements that you can do to your own map.
I didn't play much, but what I noticed was,
-the CPU units are very still and don't talk
-your dialogue occurs from 'Object Visible', you should try not to use that method
-your map design is a random arabia map or the like
-you added forests to your random map
-the town/village/city layout seems poor (tightly packed, pure houses, etc.)
-you added a 'space' between in and cluding in your first dialogue (in cluding)