i'm not the best storyline creator but i'd like to know if this sound good for an intro to the campain.
(your view is in a forest) three thieves are attacking a squire. (archer, and 2 swordsmen) 1 of the thieves commands the archer to fire. just as he does a demounted knight pushes the squire out of the way and dies from the arrow. right affter a ranger engages the thieves from behind and tells the squire to run. one of the thieves runs after the squire but the other 2 kill the ranger. You witness this event and wonder why such fuss over a small squire? after seeing this you begin to pursue the squire as well.
What do you think post any comments offering suggestions. Or things that could possibly happen after.
Thanks for posting
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TOAO_DaVe Squire
(id: Tonto_DaVe)
posted 07-10-03 10:02 PM
CT (US)
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That's a nice storyline, but where would your character be when he is witnessing the event?
Signed, DaVe.
Aero_x Squire
posted 07-10-03 10:06 PM
CT (US)
2 / 2
Well i was going to make a computer player with tribe name of you. and he's walking along heres something and starts evesdroping from behind a tree.