It sounds ok, but might be a bit naff about your-self, a bit of like "look at me" trip.
And about the spelling thing.
1) He could be a very typer but makes mistakes
2) Or Dylxeic (i'm not shure how to spell it) like me.
And people moaing about spelling gets very annyoing.
But the scenario, i'd think it would be better do something not about yourself, for i'm getting the impression your a bit big headed. And if you are gonna make it about yourself, do it subtle. In my scenario "From Squire to Knight" the name of the Hero is my first name, but i'm not shure how many ppl have worked that out
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