I tested it. No bugs but two suggestions.
First off, it would be good if you made a few changes.
1. Map design. Try to use Eye Candy (check www.scnpunk.com for Park's tips on eyecandy. SCN PUNK isn't open yet though so go to our old site to see it... www.campaigncreations.com/~aokpunk )2. Format Dialogue. Make it go like ES's...
<civ><unit>: <text>For example:
Briton Longbowman: Greetings, Subotai. I'm looking for an adventure.
This way you know who is talking. Also when you have units talk, you should use the "click-talk" technique. Instead of bringing Subotai to an object to get him to talk, use the "Object Selected" condition then display text. This is how many people to it now.
Also, make the directions more clear. It was kinda hard to figure out what to do.
Anyways, if you touch up on Mapwork and Dialogue/Instruction it would be a great scenario. Try that.------------------
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